Mujaki on page 187
Hate to nitpick, but...
That's a very WIDE car interior. With no steering wheel.
Usually only minivans have that much space between the front seats, but we can see from the outside that it's a sedan.
If I might suggest, you could try photo references to practice sketching. Machines are quite a different skill set compared to drawing human figures.

Grencham on page 187
I also hate to nitpick but i see a child with no seat belt on, that's hardly proper safety

Alkura on page 187
Grencham, consider the fact the vehicle is parked XD