Pretty much all of Ash's stories would be improved by stopping one sentence before the end.
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14th of October, 2015 (Wednesday)
Kid Cthulhu Mmmm vicarious warmth...
RazorD9 Huh, certainly true for the last page as it is for this one. Guess Ash needs to quit when she is ahead.
Chris What? I was going to say knocked the cocoa out of my hands and into my lap. That's warm, right?
DMAN Well, that story got scolded(the heat was up to eleven).( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
15th of October, 2015 (Thursday)
bleh names I can't say how many times I've had Charlie's reaction to other stories I've heard/read...although maybe not so strong as to make me jolt upright when I have a fever.
Mujaki AND it's chocolate!
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Comments (6)
Mmmm vicarious warmth...
Huh, certainly true for the last page as it is for this one. Guess Ash needs to quit when she is ahead.
What? I was going to say knocked the cocoa out of my hands and into my lap. That's warm, right?
Well, that story got scolded(the heat was up to eleven).( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I can't say how many times I've had Charlie's reaction to other stories I've heard/read...although maybe not so strong as to make me jolt upright when I have a fever.
AND it's chocolate!